Question

Hi.

Answer 1

In awe of his fresh face
The scent of his hair beholds ocean water
As if I were in a spell
Relief from my comfortable shell
The first thing I saw was him
Was it not him? My savior?
Did I really want to be set free
I didn't want to understand the things
Things. I couldn't see
An overwhelming sorrow took its toll
Falling to me knees, devastated for the pieces
of my shell
Then the young man came forward
Caressing my hands
One intimidating word it took, Stand
And thus, I arose, deciphering his eyes
He had lost something
Not a thing, but a few
It was depression and happiness in one
He was a masterpiece in my eyes
Lifting my chin, examining me
He leaned, I didn't hold back
It was him, whom I had lacked
We spent the rest of our days
Sharing love in the land of fae
Then it stopped
It was a dream, yet again
I sat in my shell, sobbing
I wanted a savior
Then it dawned to me
Will I be here, for eternity?

Answer 2

I suppose it won't be famous, but the poem will have a showcase in my heart.

Answer 3

Did you write this @Anaise ?

Answer 4

Correct.

Answer 5

Its really really beautiful.
I usually really critique poem's and go crazy because ....I can't help myself, but this is just....I dunno I have emotions now.

Answer 6

Haha, I use to be the same. I was hurting when I wrote this. I like to see writing as an escape for my heart, a place somewhere new ^.^

Answer 7

I totally understand that. It definitely help's.
But this is pretty unique. There's actually something really vivid about it that gets to me.

Answer 8

I can't put that vivid feeling in words, I just feel it 8)

Answer 9

You know, I've seen you around on OpenStudy.....doing various things in which I won't mention, but I didn't know you had such a poetic heart.
I love this :)

Answer 10

You know what our fellow writers say, writing is a passion. I didn't know I had it either. Lol, yes it might be just a bit shocking for me. We trolls have hearts deep inside.

Answer 11

Don't lose that heart :)

Answer 12

I won't, I'm just starting to dig people. Thanks Atsie.

Answer 13

You're very welcome Anaise ^-^

Answer 14

lol

Answer 15

HOW U GETS 6 MEDALS!

Answer 16

I CALL HAX

Answer 17

Lol