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A poem I wrote :3 Leave Feedback <3

Answer 1

Little bluebird told me today that you were on my mind
Decided to write this song to open my eyes to the undefined
The friendship we have will always be and never end
You was once a person to me now you're my best friend
Call it weird how I need sunglasses to tear when you cry
But it's what we do we feel each other we are ride or die
You back me up in the difficult situations and I would do the same
We talk about each other a lot put our story in a picture frame
All these memories and times with you have been worthwhile
Hadn't you known all along I loved you I only want to see you smile
In times of need when I am not there I'll be in your golden heart
I promised you I'm not going anywhere and im not till death do us apart
You mean everything to me and your someone I am going to protect
Not many out there like you, you're one of a kind absolutely perfect
You are perfect in every way i wouldnt ask for anyone else ever
I'll be here with you through the good and bad always and forever

Answer 2

This is an amazing poem @mustbethestars ! :D I'm so bad at writing poems.. ;-;

Answer 3

you are such and amazing writer! :D

Answer 4

Practice makes perfect @RainbowBrony555 trust me when I first started I sucked too. But if you quit a project you had started it was a waste of work. You have potential in you. Everyone does just put your heart in it and get something that inspires you :3

Answer 5

^-^

Answer 6

@mustbethestars you should publish

Answer 7

This is amazing !!!

Answer 8

@mustbethestars

Answer 9

Absolutely fabulous

Answer 10

AMAZING!! :p

Answer 11

That's a beautiful poem @mustbethestars .
You did a wonderful job! ^-^

Answer 12

WONDERFUL it flows graciously .. who's it about ?

Answer 13

Beautiful.....

Answer 14

It's bout my best friend :P

Answer 15

Love the poem. Awesome work <3

Answer 16

Awesome work. Good writing.

Answer 17

awesome job

Answer 18

Great Job!

Answer 19

I love it <3

Answer 20

gud

Answer 21

Wow! This is Beautiful. I love this!

Good Job Star! <3