Question

I Need help

Answer 1

Can someone plz able to help!!

Answer 2

@triciaal @priyar @shamil98 @robtobey @KyanTheDoodle @LetsLearn2000

Answer 3

There are two bar graphs which show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia. I saw that in the 1st graph, Men are more employed in all the jobs than Women for example in all the given options such as like Manufacturing, Communications, Finance/banking, Wholesale & retail trade, public sector (non-defense) and public sector(defense) we clearly see in the graph that there is more male morality than women however, in the second graph, women have succeeded men in two of the sixth jobs position which are Communications and, Wholesale & retail trade. I also saw that manufacturing is very much quite same in both bar graphs but otherwise, all the given options have a different number of employees.

Answer 4

this is what I have so far

Answer 5

excellent start

"Men are more employed" grammar More men than women are employed

think you should also mention larger gap in manufacturing and banking.

Answer 6

in the span of 20 years more women than men in Communications and Wholesale. finance/banking almost the same and narrower gap Defense

Answer 7

@triciaal well yeah I also wanna make it a little longer so... what can I mention

Answer 8

do you have time to do some numbers estimate percentages?

Answer 9

yes I do

Answer 10

where do you wanna include this sentence
in the span of 20 years more women than men in Communications and Wholesale. finance/banking almost the same and narrower gap Defense

Answer 11

put numbers to what is above too

Answer 12

put with "in the second graph, women" new paragraph

Answer 13

you touched on it. do not duplicate, merge and add numbers.

Answer 14

There are two bar graphs which show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia. I saw that in the 1st graph, more men than women are employed in all the jobs than Women for example in all the given options such as like Manufacturing, Communications, Finance/banking, Wholesale & retail trade, public sector (non-defended) and public sector(defence) we clearly see in the graph that there is more male morality than women however, in the second graph women have succeeded men in two of the sixth jobs position in the span of 20 years more women than men in Communications and Wholesale, finance/banking almost the same and narrower gap Defence. I also saw that manufacturing is very much quite same in both bar graphs but otherwise, all the given options have a different number of employees.

Answer 15

I have made some changes if you wanna look at it

Answer 16

you should be fine

Answer 17

well I don't know what to write more so..

Answer 18

total words I am getting is 147

Answer 19

they want 150 right?

Answer 20

that was before the changes and you had some "fluff" at the start

Answer 21

well its still 145 words

Answer 22

OMG what can i say more?

Answer 23

i mean there is nothing left

Answer 24

I was looking some more. i don't think you compared the same sex over the 20 year period

Answer 25

wait how yo getting 20 years period

Answer 26

example the number of men in communication about the same 250

Answer 27

from 1975 to 1995

Answer 28

not 250 should be 300

Answer 29

oh ok

Answer 30

Also in the public sector(non-defence) the number of female in both graphs is the same

Answer 31

There are two bar graphs which show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia. I saw that in the first graph, more men than women are employed in all the jobs for example in all the given options such as like Manufacturing, Communications, Finance/banking, Wholesale & retail trade, public sector (non-defence) and public sector(defense) we clearly see in the graph that there is more male morality than women however, in the second graph women have succeeded men in two of the sixth jobs position in the span of 20 years more women than men in Communications and Wholesale, finance/banking almost the same and narrower gap Defense. I saw that manufacturing is very much same in both bar graphs for the number of women and men. The number of men in communication about the same 300 in both graphs and also in the public sector(non-defence) section the number of female 650 is the same too in both graphs.

Answer 32

can someone please take a look at my grammar?