this is a poem i wrote. it's not that good tho.....
(it's a Love poem)

Faraway places, unfamiliar faces, I am far from home.
Though i see people all around me, i feel so alone.
With you gone there's nothing left.
Though there are many parts of me, you were always the best.
I can't stand the fear, the pain.
Of never seeing you again.
Clear tears, large fears. you left me to soon.
With you gone, my only friend is the moon.
I need someone to confide in.
Please come back. You're my only friend,
even though i wish we were more.

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this is a poem i wrote. it's not that good tho.....
(it's a Love poem)

Faraway places, unfamiliar faces, I am far from home.
Though i see people all around me, i feel so alone.
With you gone there's nothing left.
Though there are many parts of me, you were always the best. 
I can't stand the fear, the pain.
Of never seeing you again.
Clear tears, large fears. you left me to soon.
With you gone, my only friend is the moon.
I need someone to confide in.
Please come back. You're my only friend,
even though i wish we were more.

hope210 · Answer

It's good :)

osgood · Answer

Amazing, @Ravenclaw20 this is really good

ray_masters · Answer

not bad, I'm not in to love poems or things like that, but that was good. :)

anonymous · Answer

thanks :)