Question

Please Edit. I need it to make it good. Also, it suppose to be 4-5 page paper. I did 5 pages and like a 10th of it.

Answer 1

It is fine.

Answer 2

I mean fine.

Answer 3

No errors I can find:)

Answer 4

1. In paragraph 2 line 5 you should change it to it's.
2. In paragraph 2 line 7 change become to became. Also, drop the s on force.
3. In paragraph 2 line 9 in my opinion instead of saying " I though the special force was the way to go." you should have said, " I though that joining the U.S military was the way to go."
4. In paragraph 5 line 1 instead of saying " semester after semester" in my opinion, you should say "As each semester had passed".

That is the start of errors I could find. but it's mostly only my opinion.