Question

My new poem

Answer 1

I was born in your hand, holding me tight. A
The first thing I saw from my eye was you. B
Bringing me home safely from that scary night. A

Since then I realized you'll love me despite
of any trouble that comes in your way.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.

With you telling me every morning it was all right.
Taking care of me whole day, while you’re at work.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Since then our love have taken deep flight.
so high like a rocket reaching towards the sky.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.

I remember the first time you taught me to write.
Taking care of me while you are working whole day.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

You treating me like the flying kite,
Generous, kind and not getting angry for what I do.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Answer 2

@imqwerty

Answer 3

@ParthKohli

Answer 4

@Kainui

Answer 5

Good job, great work :) If you're willing to see some poetry work I did shoot me a PM.

Answer 6

ok, r u a girl?

Answer 7

no reply

Answer 8

I keep my gender, age, name, political allegiance, and where I live private on here :P sorry..... like I tell everyone I am a big ball a gas in the sky. I am a star who is also a christian :3

Answer 9

so deep

Answer 10

I love it!

Answer 11

Thank you :)

Answer 12

@hartnn

Answer 13

@ganeshie8

Answer 14

This is beautiful, brilliant<3 Thank you for sharing :)

Answer 15

:)

Answer 16

@Ashash146

Answer 17

@Mehek14 @Serenity74

Answer 18

Wow nice poem i shoudl say<3

Answer 19

:)

Answer 20

Thanks everyone for giving me a medal and loving my poem. :)

Answer 21

Although I am not normally "into" poems, for some reason this poem held my interest. Great job! And keep it up!

Answer 22

thanks :)

Answer 23

@HannahC234

Answer 24

@Liz_Beauty45

Answer 25

@Wendy.Ivette11714

Answer 26

That's a great poem!! Keep it up :)

Answer 27

can u medal pls my hard work

Answer 28

ty

Answer 29

do you have anymore poems?

Answer 30

good one @Adi3 =)

Answer 31

ty :)

Answer 32

np @Adi3

Answer 33

:)

Answer 34

@Lexi.babyy

Answer 35

It's really good :) Keep up the good work:)

Answer 36

medal for my hard work pls

Answer 37

@wil476003

Answer 38

That was so great! keep on writing.

Answer 39

Seems good :)

Answer 40

can u guys medal for my work pls

Answer 41

hey did u write that by yourself thats is really good excellent work

Answer 42

i did all my effort and ty

Answer 43

@phi @imqwerty

Answer 44

@Hayhayz

Answer 45

areee vah yaar

Answer 46

medal karde na yaar

Answer 47

@mazmaz1

Answer 48

wow medals for a poem i should start thinking

Answer 49

my effort m8

Answer 50

Thank you all of you guys i m crieng of happiness

Answer 51

plz close this and write a new one

Answer 52

nah i love this never close it

Answer 53

or dont write anymore its not a question

Answer 54

it is a poem? how's my poem

Answer 55

This is a great piece but please close this, and repost in music, for this is not an academic based question on english :) Thank you

Answer 56

thank you batmano3