NEED IDEAS FOR A NARRATIVE QUICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Like about someone or ur self
Pina thanks hope her teacher likes it
kk no prob
@skittles_for_life6422
Write about a time when you helped others or were helped by others. Narrate the event clearly and interestingly so that the reader understands the significance of the event and how it changed you and possibly changed others.
okay so u want ideas of how to write a narrative about u or about one of us
my teacher said it doesn't have to be something real it can be made up
did u help anyone or anything like that
not that I can remember
okay? give me a sec
are you ready
okay so basically for the narrative put detail stuff like that
okay ready
so do you what to make a couple of ideas of how you can help people
* Soup Kitchen u helped somebody there * Animal Shelter * (something i did) helped an old lady who was disabled
ok is there any other ideas you have
Gave kids cloths who couldn't get decent cloths Took someone out to dinner who couldn't afford it
is that enough ideas
I could help u write
if you have anymore that would be great because it need to be able to make this a narrative
thats all o I have but i could help u write
ok that would amazing
okay do u have an email maybe u can write what u got and i could edit it
ok here is all my teacher gave me Read the prompt. Then write an essay in response to the prompt. Your essay should be between 1–2 pages. Make sure to stay within the 35-minute time limit starting now. Remember: You need to turn this assignment into your teacher at the end of this lesson. 1. Write about a time when you helped others or were helped by others. Narrate the event clearly and interestingly so that the reader understands the significance of the event and how it changed you and possibly changed others. Answer:
okay email me what u have synene123604@gmail.com
dont exactly remember my email password
okay? dm me
btw i havent started writing it yet
its okay what topic r u going with
the soup kitchen happened to me so i have got good ideas for that
helping someone carry their books (just came to mind)
oh i could do that because i help my mom all the time
that wont reach the 35 min. mark unless u put a lot i mean a lot of detail
the 35 min thing dont really matter we have plenty of time
okay but do have a thesis and plot
and ur paper has to be 1-2 pages long
well if most narrative do then yes
yeah but you dont have help with 2 pages i just help with a paragraph or 2
kk lets start then
ok
right okay so r u helping someone pick up there books since they were knocked down by someone
yeah
okay so do u call the guy out that knocked the persons books down
okay
Okay lets start with exposition the scene will take place at school right we have to put detail into the school the lockers the tiles of the floor what class you left when u saw this . What the characters look like
lets see what u get
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okay would u call the guy out that knocked the other guys books out
here let my try something
yup but forget to add that part in
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that is great
okay we still need to add how u find "jerry"
bullying the other guy is name will be Jacob
As I walked out of Math class, Mrs Jones was still talking to some students when class was over. In the corner of my eye, I noticed poor Jerry was shoved into the red cold metal lockers. From this boy named Jacob who has been picking on him this whole year.
Okay but now explain how the characters looked
how do i put that in
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I think thats one paragraph explains the scene and the characters a little bit
try writing the second paragraph on ur own i have 2 go sry dm when u think u've finished
im srry not math related plz close
@kiity we wrote all of this i was going to tell her after we've finished so back off
If that sounds mean then again back off u should've said something sooner
:)
so harsh im not aginst it i just dont want to get in trouble
sry if that was mean
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