I have to write a scholarship essay is this a good begining: When I was in middle school I was at my grandparents house we were sitting and talking while a huge storm was brewing outside, we were sitting and talking about what I want to be and what college I want to go to. I know what you are thinking a middle school kid talking about college. I said I want to go to Tarleton State University like my grandpa and my aunt went, and I want to become a teacher. I want to further my education so I can full fill not only my dreams but my grandpa’s dream for me to go to college.

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emmagrace231 · Answer

i thinks that's good but i would edit it a bit.

kdkenzie · Answer

Its not the final its just the introduction to the essay.