Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

When you were very small 8–10 pounds, you slept in this cradle.

A.
When you were very small—(8–10 pounds), you slept in this cradle

B.
(When you were very small 8–10 pounds,) you slept in this cradle.

C.
When you were very small (8–10 pounds), you slept in this cradle.
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Question

Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence? 

When you were very small 8–10 pounds, you slept in this cradle.
  
 
 

 
 

  

  A. 
  When you were very small—(8–10 pounds), you slept in this cradle   
   

 
 

  

  B. 
  (When you were very small 8–10 pounds,) you slept in this cradle.   
   

 
 

  

  C. 
  When you were very small (8–10 pounds), you slept in this cradle.  
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deercult · Answer

The answer here is definitely C! The dash in A is totally unnecessary since there are parentheses, B has too much in them.

misssmartiez · Answer

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