Question

Is my poem good?

Answer 1

Pretty Bird


Pretty bird! Pretty bird, mine eyes doth love you best
From thy rainbow splattered fans to thine polished crown
Oh vain bird! Hath thou, your reflection sought in glass streams and mirror lakes
Passed o’er folks in hopes they’d be impressed?
Even through the enchantment of mine eye, I see you are too proud
Yet still thy feathers I will hold as keepsakes

Pretty bird! Pretty bird where hath thou been?
O’er plains and hills, past Jack’s and Jill’s
Beyond fair seas, the bluebird to shame would put
Through spiraling castles with tales yet to begin
To the far shores of Hawksbill’s
And ‘chanted islands ‘pon which no man’s set foot

Pretty bird! Pretty bird thy journeys at an end
Thou hath found a place to nest and rest thy crowned head
A cherry tree shall suffice for thee, no wandering everywhere
Oh joy! A twigged nest you’ve got with eggs to attend,
Goodbye dear bird, your travels reached an end, but mine hath just began

Answer 2

AMAZING!!! <3

Answer 3

Aww that's beautiful! I liked it especially the ending :)

Answer 4

Thank you!

Answer 5

Awesome

Answer 6

This is literally raw talent.
Its a mix between the old fashioned language of Shakespeare and Emily wingspaninson, and such a beautiful originality of innocence.
This is gold. I love it! @LittleRedRiding :)

Answer 7

wow great poem