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This is my new song hope you enjoy (: Leave feedback please:

Answer 1

We came a long way and here's to the future the future of you and me
Memories with you have been the best and there's no where I'd rather be
Yeah than with you, you, you nothing I'd rather do, do, do, than to be laying next to you
yeahhh when im talking to you i dont get butterflies yeah baby you wake up the zoo
and everything we been through we look from each others point of view
we relate so much its like we were always two but yeah guess we never had a clue
maybe its the way we knew we could be but we're supposed to be, maybe we are meant to be
Forever is a long time but you got me shackled up my heart is locked up and you have the key
Here's to the days we made it through here's to the future of me and you
The future is a mystery but let us never become a part of history
Until we die and we are named greatest couple to ever live
then they can raise their glass to the goals we set and the goals we give

I always tell you you look perfect to me but you say ew I love you and I am being true
Your blue eyes sparkle like a diamond got me going crazy inside along with your smile too
Sometimes I sit there and think for hours how does a guy like me get a girl like you
You can make me laugh, you can make me smile your everything I want you have no clue
yeah how I feel about you your perfect and everyway and you do what nobody can do
yeah it's not like its something new we had this connection before let's call it de ja vu
what's in the history we leave it and make a new future a future of me and youuuu

Here's to the days we made it through here's to the future of me and you
The future is a mystery but let us never become a part of history
Until we die and we are named greatest couple to ever live
then they can raise their glass to the goals we set the goals we give

Now we come a long way the dreams we made are starting to become reality
Take my hand we can fly away we can travel the seas
wherever I end up let it be with person I know not the person I knew
we've changed we became wiser and maybe one day ill take you down honeymoon avenue

Here's to the days we made it through here's to the future of me and you (4x)

Answer 2

I might add to it idk yet lel >.>

Answer 3

aw is this for your boo?

Answer 4

>.> yee read it lel

Answer 5

post you singing it

Answer 6

;-;

Answer 7

That's the thing I suck at singing but I am good at writing lel

Answer 8

this is feedback

Answer 9

it is gud

Answer 10

ill sing it for you

Answer 11

o.o

Answer 12

nice...really cool...classy

Answer 13

You did AMAZING at this song <3 Congrats! :D

Answer 14

Great Lyrics !
Good for beginner !

Answer 15

heh

Answer 16

Good job . I am a horrible writer :(

Answer 17

AMAZING!!!!! <3

Answer 18

that song is my fav

Answer 19

Didn't know I was that good lol

Answer 20

@Mustbethestars I love how you write. I love to write myself, but am not very good at it. I love to sing, but It's hard to find time to write during school. I'm a Freshman and do online school. I would like it if we could message somewhere else and maybe talk more. No... I'm not a creepy stalker, promise. Lol

Answer 21

Cool! I've been singing this song, and it flows nicely.