Question

In the white forest of Narnia while Lucy finds herself in the home of Mr. Tumnus the affectionate faun.

How do I re-write this to make it not a fragment sentence.

Answer 1

Try adding a comma after "Narnia" and moving "while" to the beginning of the sentence. That would make it read, "While in the white forest of Narnia, Lucy finds herself in the home of Mr. Tumnus the affectionate faun." @jazzyluvsu123