Question

Can someone help me please?

Answer 1

What do you need help with?

Answer 2

I need to write an attention grabber and whole essay

Answer 3

Wow ok what does it have to be about?

Answer 4

It has to be about how a journey builds mystery and or tension

Answer 5

Well I know something that would get my attention is asking a question to the reader then they want to read more to know the answer.

Answer 6

I honestly don't know how

Answer 7

So if your story will be about a mystery you could say something like.....Have you ever read a mystery, one that grabs your attention and is super interesting? Well this is a story about Jack and Milly and how their adventure takes them to a new land...something like that

Answer 8

Thanks

Answer 9

No problem

Answer 10

Hopefully that helps..:)

Answer 11

or mabey you could say
There is a man who lives alone in darkness, in the mansion on top of the highest mountain in town. No one knows who he is or where he came from. From time to time I think about the man who lives in the mansion. I try to imagine what he looked like and what type of person he is. Is he an old man with nowhere to go or is he someone with no family and lives up in the mansion because he has no one to turn to? Until one cold and stormy night I decide that I am going to find out who the man in the mansion is and to answer all of my questions.

Answer 12

attention grabber on mystery huh ok I will write an introduction for you and you can go from there

It was dark and damp in cellar. Julie almost tripped down the stairs. When she reaching the floor of the cellar in a corner there was a light casting an airy glow. She saw on the floor in the pool of light cast by a candle, what looked to be like a dead man.

Ok theres an introduction you can go from here

Answer 13

Well I don't see a problem with that it just depends on your writing style:)

Answer 14

@MilanItaly1618 i thought i could help lol i mean because i get an A in writing

Answer 15

Same, I was just suggesting sorry if you took it the wrong way

Answer 16

no actually ideas are always helpful

Answer 17

True