Can someone help me write an intro paragraph????
Yes mam what do you need help with
i need to write an intro paragraph about why i would make a good president @islandchick60
Well start off with a hook to grab the reader attention
Imagine a country ran by me as your president. This could be a scary thing, but imagine what i could accomplish . .... i waqs going to start it something like this
@islandchick60
Um dont say that it would be a scary thing you want to convince why you would be a good president so dont turn the to the other side in your first sentence
My name is Aleysa Bohannon and I wish to be your president. I will help mostly in the following issues: immigration, legalizing marijuana, less gun control, making the age 18 legal to purchase alcohol, and any environmental issues. I will help in these issues because... im thinking more like this
@islandchick60
Getting better. But it still throws you off a little bit. How About.... Aleysa Bohannon is my name, and you, my dear citizen are looking at your next president. I would make the United States the great nation it once was. I will make life more fun for people under the age of 18, I will make guns easier to get a hold of, and I will address any environmental issues world wide.
This is not my best work sorry but it is something.
@alleeyyssaa
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