Question

Which choice avoids fragments to present the information clearly and correctly?

Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos. It attracted a large crowd.

Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved her sleek design and funny videos. Attracting a large crowd.

Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved it. The sleek design and funny videos attracted a large crowd.

Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills, his website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos attracted a large crowd.




Which choice best describes the sentence and explains how to improve it?

After taking tickets and helping the guests find their seats, Sergio sat in the back and enjoyed the concert.


This sentence is complete and correct. It does not need any revision.

This is a comma splice. Change the comma to a period to make two complete sentences.

This is a fragment without a predicate. Add a verb to show what the subject is doing.

This is a rambling sentence. Eliminate some conjunctions. Mix short and long sentences.

Answer 1

@kittiwitti1 and dont worry im going to close this question after it gets answered so it isnt in the math forum

Answer 2

o_o

Answer 3

*reports you anyway*
Nah jk lol.

First question -
Which option has no sentence fragments and/or run-ons?

Second question -
I say the sentence looks good to me.

Answer 4

B @kittiwitti1

Answer 5

B) "Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved her sleek design and funny videos. Attracting a large crowd."

>> "Attracting a large crowd" is a sentence fragment. ☻

Answer 6

D? @kittiwitti1

Answer 7

D would work, but there's a better option.
"Because" CAN start a sentence, but there is a better way to use it. ☺

Answer 8

C.....

Answer 9

On that note... C would also not be the proper answer*

Answer 10

But the only sentence left would be A and it have a sentence fragment

Answer 11

Where? ☻

Answer 12

the last sentence. the last sentence is just like my first answer

Answer 13

A) "Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos. It attracted a large crowd."

I see no sentence fragments ☻


"It attracted a huge crowd" is not a fragment...

Answer 14

i see now thank you

Answer 15

No problem.
Happy OpenStudying! ♣

Answer 16

you got the first one wrong

Answer 17

It's wrong?

Answer 18

yes im going back to the lang arts forum to ask for help please come help me

Answer 19

ok

Answer 20

I might not be able to help, multitasking at the minute ☻

Answer 21

okay