Question

So i wrote this short story called Thank You, Joel
plz tell me what u guys think! (it'll b in the comments) i really put my everything into this so i want honest feedback
THANK U!!! :]

Answer 1

Where is the story?

Answer 2

sorry its not cooperating one sec...

Answer 3

ok

Answer 4

@MilanItaly1618 @sky_guy02 @batmano3

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@SeanStewart16 @BellaBlueBird

Answer 6

lnks don't open for me sorry >~<

Answer 7

:/

Answer 8

It works for me

Answer 9

great! :)

Answer 10

@Serenity74 @Hayhayz @ILUVSOCCER @Atsie @pooja195 @gottennis121 @Nero.Stargate

Answer 11

could u guys give me feedback about this please?

Answer 12

Interesting, love.

Answer 13

lol thanks, @Serenity74 ur a fast reader!

Answer 14

;) I am a writer bebe what do you expect ;)

Answer 15

riiight! hahaha i forgot XD @Serenity74

Answer 16

I love your book it's amazing.

Answer 17

Yeah me too

Answer 18

thanks, @wolfgirl14 and @MilanItaly1618 !!! but its just a story idk if i should make more of these or turn it into a book. which do u think?

Answer 19

I think you should make it into a book:)

Answer 20

okay ^~^ thanks!! @MilanItaly1618

Answer 21

I would love to find out what happens next but it's all up to you. I know some writers have a hard time keeping some books going. But I would love to see more continued or more short stories. :)

Answer 22

No problem@tootzrll

Answer 23

okay thank u so much! <3 @wolfgirl14

Answer 24

Your welcome @tootzrll

Answer 25

i think i wont make a lot of hassle with a book and write more short stories like this instead. books can b stressful :S idk ill think about both options. thanks again, @MilanItaly1618 and @wolfgirl14 !!!

Answer 26

ok I think that, that is probably better

Answer 27

Your welcome @tootzrll P.S you should check out wattpad. It's a cool free writing app you can post books and read also. :)

Answer 28

hmm okay ill check it out thanks! @wolfgirl14 and i think so too, @MilanItaly1618

Answer 29

Nice story!

Answer 30

wow that is amazing I only read the first few paragraphs and that's awesome you did really good keep writing one day you could be an author im sure

Answer 31

@tootzrll
Is it possible if you could put this in a google document and then post the link for all to see?
It's not making it possible for me to download your attachment.

Answer 32

WOW !! Nice book!!!!!!

Answer 33

@tootzrll Amazing! You really are talented!

Answer 34

@pink33 @fluttershyK @JoannThomas @UliNK thank u all so much! and @Atsie how would i do that?

Answer 35

@tootzrll Well, you have a google account right?

Answer 36

yes @Atsie

Answer 37

All you have to do is find google docs in the menu bu your notifications and copy and paste it into a document. :)

Answer 38

ohhhhh okay ill pm it to u or put it in here @Atsie

Answer 39

for those of you having the same problems as @Atsie here is a google doc of my story:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FY6rInBOcaXhnYuxUSCbwuOjGUA7islV3U5GJJdtMg/edit

Answer 40

and this is part 2 (bcuz i posted part 1 instead of part 2 OOPS)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qO8A3HdHD8Gpvh4fVbXZx-gKovV1f2rdvoNMurfqTHI/edit