Question

So, some of you will remember i wrote a story called "Thank You, Joel" (if u hav no idea what that is i will attach it in the comments below) this is sort of a branch off from the earlier one. its a bit longer bcuz i lost track of time and typed more than i initially shouldve but i hope you guys like it!

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this is the branch-off or Part 2

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and this is Part 1

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?

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Need help reading :)

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Or writing

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no i just need feedback on those two stories i wrote ^^^^^^^^ @alivejeremy

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Oh so u want me to read it than tell u if i like it or not ?

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yup! pretty much!

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@batmano3

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Ik i'm going to like it anyway (B

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brb let me read it

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lol thanks but id like ur complete honest opinion :) and okay!

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6 mins later -_-

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i fell asleep reading some of that

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_--_

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No feedback

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okay thanks!

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Did u wrote that :D

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yes i wrote that all of it

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Wow Kool <3

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thanks lol <3 but it puts people to sleep so idk if i should do more

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It was kinda long so i fell asleep <33

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im only half way done

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Nvm i'm at the end :)

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lol okay tell me what u think! i hav to go now but ill b back soon!

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Ok cya <33

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cyaaaa <3

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OKay tay this is realllllyy good, you just have alot of writing errors, but besides that your plot is focused and the characters come to life on the pages <3 i love the book alot and cant wait to read more, i had to break and stop cause of work but i will finish it when i can

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okie dokie! thanks mimi!! @batmano3