it takes quite a lot of effort to write beautiful words.
thoughts tumble through my teeth as a newborn baby,
bloody, confused, fresh.

it takes work to clean them
and a lot of times they keep me up at night, crying for attention.
to present thoughts to the public is to expose perhaps
the cleanest part of your conscience.

the part that you dust and clean and bathe and dress,
polish to precision.
it's easy to share that with others.

but it get's old, wouldn't you say?
a perfect poem leaves nothing to be perfected.
a book without typos condescends, it feels like.

Question

it takes quite a lot of effort to write beautiful words.
thoughts tumble through my teeth as a newborn baby,
bloody, confused, fresh.

it takes work to clean them
and a lot of times they keep me up at night, crying for attention.
to present thoughts to the public is to expose perhaps
the cleanest part of your conscience. 

the part that you dust and clean and bathe and dress,
polish to precision.
it's easy to share that with others.

but it get's old, wouldn't you say?
a perfect poem leaves nothing to be perfected.
a book without typos condescends, it feels like.

kelsey.benton00 · Answer

Not sure how to wrap this up, any thoughts?

islandchick60 · Answer

I dont know what else to say but this is awesome!

atsie · Answer

Is this a poem? @kelsey.benton00

kelsey.benton00 · Answer

Mmm yeah I guess it could be considered freestyle @Atsie and thanks (: @islandchick60

islandchick60 · Answer

Anytime @kelsey.benton00