Question

I co-made a murder mystery script with a friend (I did most of it) and I'm going to enter it in a writing competition, but I wanted people to give me feedback on it. This is just a rough draft and the 3rd time it's been changed so I'm sorry if it's bad. It was only for a girl scout badge so it's shorter than most and not a lot of detail XD. Here is the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qHKJoy4Ec_JP0_AD8pR4DwpuBsT3xb3k4K9VUBH5KOk/edit?usp=sharing

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Answer 2

I also didn't put much detail into the characters look and personality

Answer 3

It's really good! I added a few things here and there for you. But great plot twist at the ending!

Answer 4

The greatest thing I've ever read.

Answer 5

Wow! very well written. Keep up the great work!

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Thank you @soprano.h.d0816 @BrownieCat @Pinkybottom67 for your feedback

Answer 7

Youre so welcome, lil sis! <3

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@Atsie @emmagrace231 @samanthagreer

Answer 9

You're very welcome, love!! <33

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@purple_pink

Answer 12

Nice job!

Answer 13

Thank you!

Answer 14

Ayyyee this is great!! Keep it up!! :D

Answer 15

Thanks and I will :)

Answer 16

Nice work. ^.^

Answer 17

Thanks so much! ^_^ Every bit of feedback helps

Answer 18

You did fabulous on it! I could never write as you did! Well, Im not writing a play lol. Anyways you did great xD

Answer 19

Thank you, but if you try hard enough you'll soon be able to write better than anyone :)

Answer 20

Ive been trying believe me, one day when I finish writing my story Ill post it on here, I have to type it again because it was accidentally erased

Answer 21

Oh I've had that happened to me, but it was just one awesome chapter that I had poured my heart into and it got erased -_- tear. All I can say is I did not have a good reaction and I never got back to recreating it. Good luck to recreating it! -gives thumbs up-

Answer 22

well written c;

Answer 23

Dat's good!

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Thanks so much @SamsungFanBoy @JoannThomas

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This is really cool @Ghostelle