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@rebeccaxhawaii

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@mathmale

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@samanthagreer @superteenblue @Preetha @pooja195 @Oscar56524 @OTFGLOBOY @Astrophysics @a1234 @NOfreindsATall @Nero.Stargate

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@fatir5 @FortyTheRapper @Ms.Believer @myah

Answer 4

can u please read a paragraph and check it

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@the

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@TheSmartOne

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@nolangold

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I love you because you are so kind. When i first met u i felt like i had found a piece of my mind and heart that i have never had before. without you in my life i don't think i would be here. u saved my life because i was not happy with my life when you started talking to me, when u told me u loved me it made me happier with life. You are so special to me that if u were to leave i would die of a broken heart. I need you to be alive. without you i don't feel alive at all i feel like I'm in the walking dead movie I'm just kinda here on earth. If i had never met u idk where i would be i wouldn't be as into life as i am now.You are better than all the gold in the world.You are the light of my world. without you my world is like a rainy day, but with you it is a bright sunny warm summer day. You are the best Boyfriend i have ever had or will have in my life. I love you so much. i wish i could be right there by your side every second of the day. I know this may seem weird but i love every part of your body and i know for a fact you would make the best husband and dad GOD ever put on this earth.

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There are a lot of mistakes in it.

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can help pleasee

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like tell me what mistakes

Answer 12

You need to fix grammar first (u, i, punctuation, etc.).

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thanks

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@jabez177

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I love you because you are so kind. When I first met you, I felt like I had found a piece of my mind and heart that I have never had before. Without you in my life I don't think I would be here. You saved my life because I was not happy with my life when you started talking to me. When you told me you loved me, it made me happier with life. You are so special to me that if you were to leave I would die of a broken heart. I need you to be alive; without you I don't feel alive at all. I feel like I'm in the walking dead movie, I'm just kinda here on earth. If I had never met you, I don't know where I would be. I wouldn't be as into life as I am now. You are better than all the gold in the world! You are the light of my world! Without you, my world is like a rainy day. With you, it is a bright sunny warm summer day! You are the best Boyfriend I have ever had or will have in my life. I love you so much! I wish I could be right there by your side every second of the day. I know this may seem weird but I love every part of your body and I know for a fact you would make the best husband and dad, GOD ever put on this earth.

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There ya go!
With a tad bit of brushing up! :)

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thanks