Question

Is my song okay??

We were alive, our blood was red. No need for air, breathe you instead. It was magic, what we had… My love rushed in at the right time, Screamed color in your black and white. Lived a lifetime in a flash…
But I, I see how the story ends, Where I won’t stay, and where you won’t forget… Darling you’re in deep your skin is covered, Loving me with all my watercolors. But I wash out easily. All we have is this heat of the moment, Won’t last on the high of our emotions, Cause I wash out easily. Soon I’ll be gone, you don't belong with me.

Answer 1

This is really really good!!!

Answer 2

This is amazing is it okay if I give a slight idea to it?

Answer 3

Oh my Goodness! This is absolutely beautiful! I would really love to hear this as a complete song. ^-^ This is fantastic. Great work.

Answer 4

This song is called Watercolors and isn't yours. Please don't plagiarize, it only goes to show not only a lack of creativity, but originality in all aspects as well. And it's disrespectful to whoever did spend hours trying to come up with it.

Answer 5

If it's someone else's song then please take this post down. And @kelsey.benton00 has a point don't steal something that isn't yours and claim it as your own. It's incredibly disrespectful to the people who spent hours or even days writing the song. So please take down this post it'll be the best thing to do.

Answer 6

i like it ^.^