Question

can i get your thoughts on my Song i wrote

Yea i thought everyone know the real side of me but they never understood who i really am … so let me take a moment and tell you how it is... After my mom passed i fell into a downward spiral i had no clue on what to do anymore everyone said that the pain would go away but every moment i look into the sky i still see her face it hurted me to see her in pain but i got to keep living on if i want this pain to go away she always knew how to make a bad day turn to ash she always made me a better person now without her i’m falling i’m falling yeah i’m falling …i can’t do this...