Question

So me and my band wrote a new song. Could you guys tell me what you all think please. It'll be a lot of help to us since we are going to try to compete in the Ernie Ball's Tournament for Van's Warped Tour.

Answer 1

Generations
By A Burning Masquerade

Will we stand behind
The shining light that's guided us
When we were just as young
As our parents
But yet we have the will
The will to move forward

We are the spark to ignite the flame
The flame to last for generations
So our kids and their kids can live on
With no sign of worry
And fear of the world
So take my hand
And let's live on for our generation

~Heavy Progressive House Bass Drop~

When will we start again
What we left behind, so long ago
I don't wanna give up
Before its time to give in
We still have to fight
So let's fight with what we have

We are the spark to ignite the flame
The flame that will last for generations
So our kids and their kids can live on
Without a single worry
And no fear of the world
So take my hand
And let's live on for our generation

~Heavy Progressive House Bass Drop~

*singing softly*
When will they know
That they are safe from the world
We just have to let them go
And let them see the world
With their own eyes

Answer 2

I'm loving it. :)

Answer 3

Do you think you can run like an acoustic version of it and post it to YouTube or something? I like the lyrics a lot and the message they carry, but am having some trouble establishing the flow and intended rhythm, without being able to hear it. Seems like it has a lot of potential tho :p Nice job.

Answer 4

We probably might make a acoustic version eventually but right now it will be like a Social Repose song from his 2014 album Maniacal Love. Me and the rest of A Burning Masquerade was up all night last trying to come up with new music to present at the Ernie Ball tournament this summer.