Question

i have a poem and I want to know what ya'll think

Answer 1

All inside by. Kitty
Hidden,
so no one will see me
beaten,
that's how I know no one cares
crying,
but no one can hear me

so I just lay here
dying and dying again
no light to see
no one to hear
all I need
is someone to love
someone near
no hand to hold
no mouth to laugh
I cry till I cry no more
I just want someone
to free me
from all the pain inside

I am falling
deeper and deeper
each day
I keep my cuts
hidden
and I put on a mask
cause I know
every one will believe the fake smile

I am not done this is all I have so far!

Answer 2

I have more but I will only put one at a time

Answer 3

Very good

Answer 4

thank you

Answer 5

@sam141101 @Ms.Believer @PillowFace750

Answer 6

@drawwithapurpose

Answer 7

very well written kitty

Answer 8

beautifully written. deep.

Answer 9

nice poem I liked it, good job

Answer 10

thank ya'll

Answer 11

I liked it. I actually understand it. Thanks for not over-complicating it!

Answer 12

haha u welcome @FortyTheRapper

Answer 13

I agree with @FortyTheRapper

Answer 14

Just pray by. kitty
I try to fly
but my wing is broken
I try to sing
but there is no sound
I try to dance
but I am unable to

when i look around
I see many people
broken people and,
people acting
but I know that
everyone has a problem
small or big
we all have one

when I try to help
I get pushed away
it makes me sad
but I do the same
what ever your problem is
don't worry cause it will get better
it might happen fast
or It might happen slow
but just pray about it
cause now

I try to fly
I soar all around
I try to sing
now I never stop
I rty to dance
I am everywhere

but let me tell you
it will get better
but trust me when I say
I never thought it would
but God sent me my
miracles hidden

but I found them
and now I am saved
you might say I am wrong
but I will answer you with
"just pray"

Answer 15

Whoa.

Answer 16

I LIKE IT @kitty626oldrose

Answer 17

this is amazing

Answer 18

thank you @Destinycholie

Answer 19

I love these!

Answer 20

WOW! this is good! :)

Answer 21

they are sad but good it comes from the heart @kitty626oldrose

Answer 22

I like the emotion transition while using the same phrases in that second poem. You have talents a.k.a. skillzzzzzzz

Answer 23

@princess303

Answer 24

nice!

Answer 25

@Studygirl303