Question

What do you think of my song

Everything to me is torture & war how do i sleep at night when all i think is why you left i experience nothing but sleepless nights wondering if i should take my life i already hate myself i can't deal with this i need to be by myself this anxiety is too much for me to bare it´s already got me on my hand & knee´s somebody take away this anxiety i pray to god to take this pain away but i'm still here asking why… why can't people understand? why won't anybody love me? why do you want me to cry? you think words don't hurt? I got a billion scars from what you say…
You destroy me everyday. I'm giving in i'm on my knees asking you to stop giving me pain i'm begging you to help but you look at me and say nothing. why do you keep me down? what did i do to you? I'm a regular person who wants love. why do you think i'm a fool for still loving you? Why do you push me away? i'm like every other person but you don't look at me the same… I'm a man of constant sorrow i've seen trouble all my days it's only a moment before i'm gone & i am keeping on just act like you love me so i can go on i'm starting to lose my sense of home i've been waiting for your call i'm running low i don't think i will be able to feel again if you're not with me

Answer 1

@kelsey.benton00 what do you think

Answer 2

i love it good job

Answer 3

it's depressing :p

Answer 4

Thanks i just write bout past expriences

Answer 5

This really is super depressing. If this is how you feel,or even felt, you should probably talk to somebody about it.

Musically speaking, this is not a song. This is really just a poem and even that I'm not so sure about. Come back when you've written some music. :)

Answer 6

@tanner23456 its a rap

Answer 7

i like it

Answer 8

If it's a rap, then it really shouldn't be called a song. Calling something a "rap song" is a border line oxymoron.

Answer 9

stop being a smart*ss

Answer 10

^ chill

Answer 11

yeah dude chill

Answer 12

^ Pretty sure she was talking to you "dude"

Answer 13

auly take a pill son, pretty sure you're on the losing side.
next time tho (:

Answer 14

who is auly? ;)