Question

A lil somethin I wrote whole I was gone

Answer 1

~ Beautiful Eyes~
[Raven Parody]
Written by Jayna Hart

You came to me crying in pain
Bringing tears to my eyes
I know that your trying not to show
Yet you're lost and can't see through those years in your beautiful eyes
Protecting and defending every lie
I can't stand to see you cry
Yet I can this struggle with this double personality
Feeling like there's no more life
Saying your dumb and you're done
Talking bout how your ready to die
Talking bout how you tried being wise
You're saying you've lost your life
You look like you don't have a chance at a first glance
You're hiding the strife
You think you're seeing clearer in the broken mirror
You look at the sky
Thinkin that you'll never get that high
Yet you don't see the ground cause you're so blinded by your own lies
You can't see the ground cause your still bound
You life your tired eyes
You're hurt and you're always curt
You said you can no longer cry
You said all you can do is sigh
But you know one day you'll lift yourself up and go high
You just had a season of tears for a reason
That reason wad to show you that you can handle life
No one can bring you down to the ground anymore
You're so high
You're in the sky
Finally there are no crystal water drops in those big beautiful eyes

Answer 2

good. I like it

Answer 3

@ @ @emmiegrace22
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Answer 4

@logan420

Answer 5

Thanks tag anyone ya know so I can their opinion also

Answer 6

@drawwithapurpose @sam141101 @OTFGLOBOY

Answer 7

Thank you

Answer 8

Reading it in my head it sounded amazing. Reading it out loud I couldn't figure out what genre it would go under. So my question is what kind of genre would this song categorize under? I'm just curious because it's put amazingly.

Answer 9

What'd you mean genre?

Answer 10

@logan420

Answer 11

amazing

Answer 12

Ty :*

Answer 13

Like is it rap, rock, pop.....

Answer 14

I mostly write raps lol so this is that

Answer 15

great work keep it up