Question

Here is my song im going to post it in the comments tell me if its good :)

Answer 1

VERSE 1
Do you have to look at me that way? Don’t say you’re sorry that you can’t stay We both know my time is up I’ve put you through enough I don’t deserve that much But could you let me look at you one last time And see the pretty girl who once was mine One last look before you leave Oh, won’t you smile for me? That’s really all I need to keep in my memory
PRE-CHORUS 1
And I know you only wanted what’s best for me I’d never even try to hear you out And now that you’re gone I just can’t sleep Knowing that I’ve let you down where did I go wrong? How could you have been so strong? To just get up and move… on
CHORUS
Because your figure your hips Every look and every breath Still got me dyin’ I can’t get you out of my mind Because your figure, your hips Every look and every breath, your kiss Still got me dyin’ No matter how hard I try Can’t get you out of my mind
VERSE 2 (RAP)
spent months alone stuck in the same place no matter where i look, all i see is the same face same eyes – been starin’ back, they look like they don’t feel a thing same lips – won’t call me back, been a while since they’ve said my name do you understand that’s it so wrong that it only took you 2 weeks to go and move on i'm alone know i was meant to lose have you read the letters i sent to you? now i see the truth… all the things i never meant to you

PRE-CHORUS 2
You said you only wanted what’s best for me Where were you when I needed you the most? With you gone, I finally see That I’ve always been alone Told me to stay strong That it wouldn’t take too long For me to move… on
CHORUS
Because your figure your hips Every look and every breath Still got me dyin’ I can’t get you out of my mind Because your figure, your hips Every look and every breath, your kiss Still got me dyin’ No matter how hard I try Can’t get you out of my mind
BRIDGE
I never want to look into your eyes again No, I never want to hear your voice again Let me go, let me go Baby tell me this is the end… Because your figure your hips Every look and every breath Still got me dyin’ I can’t get you out of my mind
CHORUS
Because your figure, your hips Every look and every breath, your kiss Still got me dyin’ No matter how hard I try Can’t get you out of my mind

Answer 2

Amazing I enjoyed reading. Can't wait to hear a recording of it soon.

Answer 3

@A_Burning_Masquerade thx but i cant/don't sing

Answer 4

good ill use it, do you mind?

Answer 5

no you are not good you are amazing!!!

Answer 6

i wasnt talking about the song

Answer 7

@aulyanchuk I was going to write with all do respect but at this point you're just being annoying and you're interfering with people's thought process to work. Now please stop commenting mean/hateful/false things on people's posts or I'll have to report you to a higher admin. It's up to you. I'm giving you a choice stop or be reported your choice. Either you give instructive criticism or tell them how good it sounded or something. If not then I will report you to a higher up admin. I'm giving you a chance to stop. Next time I see one comment like any of the ones you've been posting over the course of the last week or so I will report you. This starts immediately.

Answer 8

Also comments including how your going to steal someone else's song.

Answer 9

I love it :) @ShyKitty and @A_Burning_Masquerade Finally someone is telling her she keeps doing this on post.

Answer 10

Yeah she's been saying things like this on my post to.

Answer 11

oooooh im so scared, go ahead report me, i aint scared of b*ullsh*t like you