Question

Tell me if these lyrics are too cheasy

Answer 1

I'd compare your eyes to the stars, but that would not be fair
'Cause there's no contest there
I'd compare you beauty to the moons, but that just ain't right
The moon don't shin that bright

Whenever you need me I'll be there for you
I'd walk a thousand miles just to see you smile
Whenever your in trouble I will stand by you
I would save your life even if it ended mine

Answer 2

aww I love that . I think that is really good !

Answer 3

Thank you!! Means a lot!

Answer 4

This is amazing!

Answer 5

Thanks!
I actually wrote this when I was a freshman, I just found that notebook lying around earlier this week

Answer 6

@Adrianna.Gongora I wrote this for you
(just kidding)
(or am I)

Answer 7

lol your dumb :) but it's nice I like it

Answer 8

haha thanks!

Answer 9

It's quite cliche if that's what you mean. I'm not one to like this type of stuff but lot's of people love it for some reason though. It really just depends on personal preference. Do you plan on turning this into a song?

Answer 10

called it cx @MathMusician

Answer 11

I have a couple more if you want me to post them

Answer 12

:D do it cause tanner is good at showing people what needs to be worked on and then you can fix them if you want to and make them amazing :) I know you can.

Answer 13

Wow! I think they are so good! :)

Answer 14

Thanks @Agl202