Question

Here is another song I've been working on

Answer 1

There you go, tear stains on your face
Makeup all over the place
Here you are, telling me your okay
But I know you got a lot more to say

C'mon stand up and sing this song
Move your body to the rhythm all night long
It doesn't matter what your going through
Just know you gotta friend that's always here for you

Answer 2

I love this

Answer 3

It's good. It's definitely in it's infant stages. There isn't really enough here for me to give you a real critique. Just remember that when you write your lyrics all that really matters is how they flow and if they mean something to you.

I find with the lyrics that I write, people come up with different interpretations of what I had originally written and that's ok. It's ok for lyrics to be mysterious and seemingly incomplete or out of context. I find that I appreciate lyrics more when they're indirect and you have to search them to find what they mean to you. I think you can reach a lot more people that way. Just a suggestion. Keep writing.

Answer 4

so catchy i love it! <3

Answer 5

There isn't much to it though, not yet.

Answer 6

It's amazingly g8t! I like it. Good job! :)