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fourth chapter, thanks to those who leave a feedback ;)

OpenStudy (ray_masters):

-five minutes later- Claire had to fight her way through the crowd of teenagers heading for the bus, mostly everyone had left already but one soul still remained. She looked at him. "What the heck, Knight! Detention?!" She yelled at him. He just rolled his eyes, he was already over it, now he just wanted some rest and time to write. "Ugh you don't even care. First day and detention already. You need help." Claire smiled and walked out the door, yelling 'cya tomorrow.' He laid his head on the desk, closed his eyes and letting out a sigh before Claire returned. “By the way welcome to Strawson High.” She smiles and then was gone. He pulled out his book and wrote everything that was a bit least interesting. Claire speaking herself. That boy –Claire’s brother-, falling asleep and getting into this mess. -small time skip- Something soft was being pushed against his forehead, he groaned and realized he had a huge headache that only got worse as whatever the heck was pushing against his forehead. He heard a girl's voice but it wasn't Claire's, it was softer. He groaned and looked up. A girl with light green eyes and dark brown hair was pressing a rag to his forehead. "Well, look who's awake. Sleep, much?" She asked but smiled when he just yawned. He roughly shoved her hand away when she was going to rub his forehead again. "Would you stop that! God, I already have a headache and you're making it worse." He turned his head away from her. He then felt her hands on his shoulders, rubbing them. He guessed it sort of felt good, he sighed and closed his eyes once more. "Katy! Get away from him." A voice called out waking him up once more. "Greyson, I'm not doing anything wrong so why don't you leave?" Katy, the girl replied. Once he looked up he realized it was the boy that claimed to be Claire's brother, he was standing at the door with two other boys and he didn't look pleased. Claire's brother walked fully in the room and shoved Katy away from him, then he looked at him and said, "get up, you're coming with us." Willingly he got up, grabbed his book and followed him out the door, followed by the two other boys, leaving Katy in the room. Claire's brother, Greyson, gripped his shoulder as they walked away, he kept looking around him like someone was watching him. "Good thing we were scanning the rooms, dude." One boy said, the other laughed and agreed. "Scanning the rooms? I'm sorry, I'm confused." Knight looked at the two boys then Greyson. Greyson looked at him, a smirk on his face. Somehow he felt like Greyson was the pack leader here, the two other boys seemed to be the followers. "We were scanning the rooms for anyone else that was here before we left. Lucky we found you when we did or else Katy would have devoured you." "Devoured?" Knight let out a laugh. “devoured? Really?” "Yea, you don't want a girl like Katy on your case. She'll chew you up like bubblegum then spit you out like she tasted dirt instead of yummy delicious juice." The two boys laughed at that weird and uncomfortable metaphor. Knight felts as if they were just kidding him and laughing at him...and he hated it. "Listen dude, just stay away from Katy, you wouldn't want her on your back...or on you for a matter of a fact." Greyson spoke and once again the two boys laughed. He wanted to punch them and wipe those smiles off their faces. He was always told he had a short temper. "Ha ha, let me know when you're going to stop playing around." Knight replied, walking ahead of them. He was jerked back and to a stop as someone grabbed his arm, he looked at them with cold eyes. "Get your hand off me before I take care of it." He growled. Greyson, he figured out was the one who had grabbed him. The boy didn't look right. He stared at him like he grew another head. "Listen here, I don't care how cocky you are. Just stay away from Katy." Greyson shoved his finger into his chest. Knight groaned and slapped his hand away. "I'll do whatever the hell I want, dude. Get off my back." He growled. "Just don't fall for her, she'll hurt you." Greyson whispered as if he were remembering something painful. "Like I need a girlfriend, I just started this school." Knight said as he began to walk away. Greyson watched as the new kid, Knight, walked away like he didn't have a care in the world. He sighed and came to realize that he wouldn't take his advice and do something stupid. He called the two boys over. "Ray and Luke, we'll have to keep an eye on that one. Do anything to keep Katy away from him. No one needs to be hurt again." The boys nodded their heads before leaving him. He turned and called out, "You stay away from him, Katy." With that he walked away, shoving his hands into his pants pockets.

OpenStudy (ray_masters):

@BigDreams @Osgood @JoannThomas @briannaontimeforreal

OpenStudy (osgood):

I am kinda curious to see how this goes, @Ray_Master

OpenStudy (ray_masters):

cool @Osgood glad you like it so far because i'm starting to have doubt lol

OpenStudy (briannaontimeforreal):

wym

OpenStudy (briannaontimeforreal):

wym @Ray_Masters

OpenStudy (briannaontimeforreal):

oh nvm

OpenStudy (briannaontimeforreal):

sorry

OpenStudy (osgood):

Why are you doubting @Ray_Masters

OpenStudy (ray_masters):

I feel as my work is starting to come to the main problem of the story and I just don’t know how it should be put in the story. lol I think I have rewritten it like 5 times already

OpenStudy (osgood):

Post chapter five!!!!!!!!!! @Ray_Masters

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