Question

New Song called Meaning of life still isn't finish please tell me which lyrics u like most and what to take out

Answer 1

I woke up in the morning like going to the club not no church like I can do that anyday, god gonna forgive me anyway,don’t take anything seriously,life full of misory, people like ….trump vote for Hilary I use to think the US was about liberty, but it was all foolery, but I ain’t worrying about it just gonna live life and strive for victory,but like you know pac was the best rapper but now it’s all history, I hope your listening to me because nowadays life is a mystery,I just want to get that money and that silvery, all these cops killing black kids but that it ain’t no injury,cuz like dude this is a war between demons and angels the world want to give all of us labels, but if you believe it then it becomes reality, I live life to my fullest and just do it practically, got deez other rapers doing nothing but pretend man this ain’t nothing like back then. But long story short you got perverts and thugs out here while kids ending up dead,they all got us fooled, back then people hated blacks it’s like deja-vu. I might not got not gold teeth but mines is real cuz u know I’m the realest You know I’m a thug gangster emoji,sleek-feathered one back off me you don’t me I’m that type of sleek-feathered one that will open up a closet of rifles and y’know I’m that type of sleek-feathered one who’ll say sleek-feathered one smile and y’know I’m that type of sleek-feathered one who go to the club and get drunk and say we went wild say sit down we can have a talk about birds and bees u know I’m not up to that discussion sneak out that house get in the car you know the mission but dang realized I left without permission it’s ight but when I’m done gonna need lots of stitching don’t talk about praising Lucifer u alrdy know I’m a Christian you say you dope but that was nothing but fiction I know my multiplication and my division I know swag+me means girls and the world.Money,Fame, I Seek it all one day I might get it,maybe someday they’ll be handing out tickets,fake friends sends you messages, know I never check it,hand out that money you know I’m gonna take it.y’know I live that thug life and I never fake it. ;-; this isn’t a dream it’s real stuff, but I feel like it’s still isn’t enough …I Seek the world,I Seek Money,I Seek Friendship, I seek Honeys, I Seek the Truth which will never be ended,life is short something that can’t be spended but when I comes to my senses I realize theres more to life then what people think,life is short so live life to the fullest if you lost people close to you then you probably already know this, Real talk and if you can’t stand it u can leave through the door right now but don’t slam it

Answer 2

Sleek feathered one is filter *.* but it's funny

Answer 3

@FFASinger

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@Hayhayz

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@Kitten_is_back @deadpoolroxz @Maddog1456

Answer 6

actually may change the itle because says more then meaning of life idk yet

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title*

Answer 8

do you know what is going to be your verses , bridge, chorus

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@ORCAstudentalicia1 @Qwertty123

Answer 10

lol nope just rough drafting at the moment but i will eb working on taht

Answer 11

it mght be esier if you did that first

Answer 12

just sayin from experience

Answer 13

yea i was thinking of a rhythm it's mainly gonna be singed but there will be a part that's rapped out

Answer 14

Nice Job! <3

Answer 15

I read it about half way through then you used the n word several times. Please at least censor the vulgar words for the younger people on this site. They do not need to be exposed to language like that yet. Aside from that what is your goal of the song? Explain what you mean by everything because when I read it I felt like there was a lot of hate put into this song. Also where is the chorus? Is this just one giant verse and then the chorus comes later?

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thank you @A_Burning_Masquerade

Answer 17

idk still thinking this is gonna be added to a song

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@L094N16

Answer 19

wow that was so awesome keep up the good work!!!

Answer 20

but i will try to take out the n word lol and try to get everything else out liek the chorus

Answer 21

What song? Is this an addition to another song you wrote? I don't understand this song. That's why I'm asking explain the meaning behind it.

Answer 22

yes this is a addition right now i'm rough drafting that's what i do before i make songs

Answer 23

@sam141101 @EricaEllis2016

Answer 24

and not meant to be hateful it's meant to send a message out to people. more then hateful

Answer 25

Explain the whole meaning of the song please so hopefully I have a better understanding of the song. Also why not post the other part of the song so everyone can judge the whole song instead of just this part.

Answer 26

when i say i'm that type of sleek feathered one that will pull out closet of rifles and go to the club not actually saying i'll do that...kinda like acting

Answer 27

Well yeah so does my music from time to time but I go a different route with mine. Then again I don't rap I play in a totally different genre than rap.

Answer 28

tru, i'm not sure about my chrous and etc yet rapping is the easiest part so getting that part oft he song out of the way

Answer 29

I'm dying right now. In one complete comment post your entire meaning behind the song.

Answer 30

lol i'm a beginner at songwriting ... but meaning is to teach people live life everyday as if it's your last

Answer 31

I get certain things here and there but I mean the entire song as a whole.

Answer 32

eh do u ahve any example songs i could refer to because like i said i'ma beginner at writing music

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@NekoKittu

Answer 34

I've been writing music for almost two years now with my band. Refer to my last post. It's not my greatest set of lyrics I've ever made but it's still gets the point of the song across.

Answer 35

matt when writing music you always have a verse chorus bridge and a second verse. you nee to doo that first or ele you are going to be very confused . i have been writing music for years .

Answer 36

Keep in mind I write different style of music than you so my meaning for songs may be different than yours.

Answer 37

true

Answer 38

i am seious tho you need to fix it and make it into an actual song

Answer 39

oh i see i appreciate the feedback

Answer 40

why u @Nekokittu what did i do

Answer 41

lol tagging people names i see in chat^^^

Answer 42

ooooo ok then

Answer 43

okay i'llw ork on that masquerade your example post helped me alot think ik what i need to do now

Answer 44

good job

Answer 45

@A_Burning_Masquerade example was great for you to read good job.

Answer 46

probaly finish it in a day in a half or so not sure i put full thought into my songs

Answer 47

listening to music helps me write music

Answer 48

Anywho appreciate the feedback once i finish i'll put a song u can hear but um Vocal thing what can u use to record songs? x.x not the best singer btw i'm not horrible neither good

Answer 49

i'll close this post and work on that