Question

New Song What Do You Think
Still Not Done Though

This is who I am inside
This is who I am I'm not gonna hide
Cause the greatest risk we'll ever take is by far
To stand in the light and be seen as we are
So stand in the light and be seen as we are
Saw your face in the ocean burn nothing left except
For my bones they're at the time
We've spent together was meant to last night onward,
Onward, onward onward a new frontier to sink our
Teeth in and forget what you did to me
The lines on my last thread pulling
Away to no avail yeah now it's our time

Then Another New One
I know you gonna be mad
The feelings that you thought you had
Was for another guy
Well, I’m that other guy
I’m just a shy kid
Camouflaged before your eyes
Then I knew my lyrics were the key to see the other side.
I should have told you but I never had the courage
And I thought you really wouldn’t understand. (no)
And now I’m up here just to let my feelings surface
Apologizing for disguising who I am

Answer 1

@Quinnlover @GirlGamer21 @nichole123 @callmejax @skatergirl147 @XhawaiiangirlX

Answer 2

There really good :)

Answer 3

thanks

Answer 4

i think you got good musical taste

Answer 5

Thank You

Answer 6

np

Answer 7

I like it alot

Answer 8

Another piece of advice when writing a song you need to make sure that it doesn't sound like a ongoing poem make sure you know the beat and where the high and low key notes are.

Answer 9

Thanks for the input :)

Answer 10

i am actually a singing mentor for my dad's studio so if you need help just ask

Answer 11

@friendzone

Answer 12

@Ravenclaw20 what u think

Answer 13

cool. i like it.