Can someone tell me if my answer makes sense?
Esperanza describes her mother's hair as being "like little candy circles all curly and pretty." What does this metaphor, and those in the next paragraph, suggest about Esperanza's feelings for her mother? Esperanza describes the different types of hair of all the members of her family. Her own hair doesn’t do what she wants it to do, while her sister’s is smooth and oily. Her mother’s hair is beautiful and smells like bread. Esperanze describes her mothers hair’s by saying “…like little candy circles all curly and pretty because she pinned it in pincurls all day” (6). This gives you a good picture of her mother and also, how Esperanza views her. Esperanza could have easily compared it to something that has bad connotations, but because she doesn’t you can assume that Esperanza has a good relationship with her mother.
That sounds pretty good to me, maybe add some more vocabulary words to impress your teacher :).
thank you :)
Sure thing.
can you do another one?
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