Question

Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly?

"Oh, wow!" Ashley cried. "I love these shoes." "They would look good on you," said her friend.

A.
correctly

B.
incorrectly

Answer 1

What do you think

Answer 2

b

Answer 3

Good job

Answer 4

Looks correct to me. The punctuation doesn't seem off to me. Unless her friend said both of the last statements then I would say it's incorrect. ??? http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/there-are-no-rules/keep-it-simple-keys-to-realistic-dialogue-part-i http://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/