Question

my first poem

Answer 1

ok

Answer 2

I was born in your hand, holding me tight. A
The first thing I saw from my eye was you. B
Bringing me home safely from that scary night. A

Since then I realized you'll love me despite
of any trouble that comes in your way.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.

With you telling me every morning it was all right.
Taking care of me whole day, while you’re at work.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Since then our love have taken deep flight.
so high like a rocket reaching towards the sky.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.

I remember the first time you taught me to write.
Taking care of me while you are working whole day.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

You treating me like the flying kite,
Generous, kind and not getting angry for what I do.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Answer 3

wow

Answer 4

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Answer 5

hey I have an idea for you :)

Answer 6

yea?

Answer 7

thats awesome!

Answer 8

try something called allpoetry.com :) you can post poems and get feedback from people all over the world :)

Answer 9

and plus, its free

Answer 10

cool

Answer 11

yeah :) I have about 20 ish poems posted :)

Answer 12

nice

Answer 13

:) lmk if you ever want feedback :)

Answer 14

ok