Question

My First Poem

Answer 1

I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
The first thing I saw from my eye was you.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Since then I realized you'll love me despite
of any trouble that comes in your way.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.

With you telling me every morning it was all right.
Taking care of me whole day, while you’re at work.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Since then our love have taken deep flight.
so high like a rocket reaching towards the sky.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.

I remember the first time you taught me to write.
Taking care of me while you are working whole day.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

You treating me like the flying kite,
Generous, kind and not getting angry for what I do.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Answer 2

@rebecca.syvanen

Answer 3

@Ravenclaw20

Answer 4

WOW! i love it!

Answer 5

ty i figured that i could get peoples feedback on it and if they liked it they might medal

Answer 6

:)

Answer 7

tag your friends and have them read it

Answer 8

@kelsey_luh_ya_for_life_yeah_me

Answer 9

love it

Answer 10

I love it. Great Job

Answer 11

This is great, is it about some one?
@Ray_Masters

Answer 12

@sky_guy02 @batmano3 @Decarr432 @Robin.Hood @RhondaSommer @Heypips

Answer 13

YES?

Answer 14

Very good, filled with emotions. :)

Answer 15

That is very lovely, Please do more you got talent

Answer 16

mmk

Answer 17

thank you all for your support

Answer 18

Nice job! ^_^

Answer 19

Good job. @SkyVoltage

Answer 20

amazing job, i love it!

Answer 21

@Lovelarap @Love.Bug

Answer 22

that is beautiful! great poem ^w^

Answer 23

it's really nice! i luv it! ^_^

Answer 24

for those who might not know this is a poem for my mom. may she rest in peace

Answer 25

@RedNeckOutLaw

Answer 26

@YanaSidlinskiy

Answer 27

@lia22@naate

Answer 28

@naate

Answer 29

ty its for my mom who passed

Answer 30

yea ty

Answer 31

@caseysorensen @princesskitty01

Answer 32

that's really good

Answer 33

agree

Answer 34

I love it! Good job

Answer 35

:O WOWZERZ!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!! :D I wuv it volt! :3

Answer 36

@dako87

Answer 37

i like it a few typos but other then that really deep

Answer 38

i checked there isnt any

Answer 39

Taking care of me whole day, need to be a the in between whole and day

Answer 40

needs lol here i am making the same mistake i'm telling you about

Answer 41

ok thank you

Answer 42

@ImpracticalJoker

Answer 43

@MinnesotaWild11

Answer 44

Wow, 11 medals.

Answer 45

yea ikr

Answer 46

dang sky

Answer 47

its just some stuff i was playing with a couple days ago

Answer 48

i love and it and i wants a medal cause im awsome xD

Answer 49

xD i always win

Answer 50

do i get medal?

Answer 51

yes i always give you one

Answer 52

sky
i did a essay on jfk xD

Answer 53

nice pm me

Answer 54

the essay?

Answer 55

@Hauntedwoodsgal @A_Burning_Masquerade @Love.Bug

Answer 56

omg i love it! great job

Answer 57

Amazing

Answer 58

Really good bravo. Snap my fingers for how good it was.

Answer 59

@DallasCowboys88

Answer 60

nice poem

Answer 61

ty

Answer 62

you almost made me cry XD

Answer 63

do you know who its about?

Answer 64

your mother, who passed away???, or your father???

Answer 65

mom

Answer 66

wow that was really good

Answer 67

There is no way that is your first poem. it is amazing! keep writing!

Answer 68

you're an natural

Answer 69

:D awesome!

Answer 70

@islandchick60 well.it.is.my.first.poem

Answer 71

@vannieduval

Answer 72

thats really good volt

Answer 73

ty hey can you tag people in this im trying to get peoples responses

Answer 74

@LichKing @kenziedawn @sweetburger @soxfan347 @chris3407

Answer 75

@NekoMatt

Answer 76

@drawwithapurpose tag people so they can read my poem

Answer 77

@Elsa213 @Maddog1456 @AloneS @Mehek14 @gottennis121 @Hannah_Rockz

Answer 78

nice

Answer 79

it's too good to be your first poem...

Answer 80

it is

Answer 81

@marcelie

Answer 82

ohh nice :D i like it