Question

My new poem!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 1

I'm not afraid,
to stand in the rain,
If it won't stop,
I won't drop,
I will not run away;
I will just stand there,
let it come down on me;
I won't cry,
If you pass me by,
And don't look me in the eye,
I will just stand here,
let the rain wash away
my fears, wash away my doubts,
wash away this lonely house.

Answer 2

Tell me what you think :)

Answer 3

Wonderfully written, great job. ^_^

Answer 4

amazing i loved it!!

Answer 5

I'd fix the line "I won't cry" - there is a space before it and it looks wierd. also, you use a lot of commas

Answer 6

its really too good... i actually loved it... its jst vry awsom... :D

Answer 7

if you could add more context about the house

Answer 8

I was thinking of doing that @dako87 :)

Answer 9

it would add some more depth and tearjearking to the poem

Answer 10

yep I'll work on it in a little bit. Thank you for your feedback :)

Answer 11

It is amazing

Answer 12

Very good. you can feel the the emotion in this!

Answer 13

It's really good!

Answer 14

I love it <3

Answer 15

I love it. Its what I needed right now. Thx for the empowering words. :) @Hope210

Answer 16

Your welcome @islandchick60

Answer 17

I love it!! Good Job. (:

Answer 18

:D nice!!!!!

Answer 19

Fantastic!

Answer 20

I wike it!

Answer 21

nice job