WILL MEDAL AND FAN! pleases check my grammar check please?

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@EricaEllis2016

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all of them?

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as much as you can

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okie dokie

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15 should have a semi colon between hours and I

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okay

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16 there should be a comma between us and sat

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okay

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PS i am just doing the ones that seem the most obvious to me

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okay that cool

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18 there should be a semi colon between children and they

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19 there should be a comma between long and violent

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okay

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21 there should be a semi colon between fiasco and no

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okay

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give me one sec i gotta write an email to a friend

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thats okay thanks so much for the help.me know when you come back.

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ok i am back

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oh that was fast

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yeah lol i don't really remember clauses Dx sorry about that so I can't really help with the first page

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thats really okay.you can just help me with the one you know

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and I have no idea what the heck a noun clause is either :/

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so that's kind of all I know :/ sorry couldn't be of more help

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thank so much for the trying .you did your best.

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What do I have to do? Full guidelines please.

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No problem :))

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@MissSmartiez  the instruction on top the paper .its grammar check .

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I have to go, however, the first isn't right.


On the desk lays a nail file. Which is used to open letters.

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which he used*


It seems like the words are jumbled up.

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I see alot of corrections but I must go, I will respond tomorrow.

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okay thank you.

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For number 13 this appears to be an incomplete sentence. Consider rewriting the sentence or connecting the fragment with another sentence.
A complete sentence requires a main clause, which includes a subject, a verb, and a complete thought. When one of these components is missing, the result is called a sentence fragment or incomplete sentence. To correct the problem, the fragment must be rewritten to include the main clause or joined in some way with the existing main clause of another sentence.

Incorrect:
I had a long day at work. So tired now!

Correct:
I had a long day at work. I am so tired now!

Correct:
I am so tired after a long day at work.

Incorrect:
A lot of snow this winter.

Correct:
A lot of snow fell this winter.

Correct:
There was a lot of snow this winter.

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http://www.waynecc.edu/pdf/asc/english/SetenceFragmentRunon.pdf

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Or:

 I had a long day at work; so I'd tired now.

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thats okay.you can help me when ever u  get a chance

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@civicsiscool44 can i get help?

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what you need help with????????

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i attached the link above .check it out

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this is really hard let me call someone over here to check it out

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this is really hard let me call someone over here to check it out

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thanks alot

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@this are you there?

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@saucvi

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please help this person

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im here @civicsiscool44

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@jhonyy9

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Back, what is up?