Question

i made a rap and need opinions, lemme know, it will take a min but the lyrics on in the comments....

Answer 1

excuse the language lol

Answer 2

good job

Answer 3

its nice i rap to

Answer 4

no surrender, no retreat,
only the hard none of the weak.
i stay with that paper i get it forsure,
dont doubt my ni***** they know how we roll.
i stay on my grind im racking and packing,
got bags of that loud all in my jacket,
if you talking sh** then we get to smacking,
b**** n***** what you gon do,
i got money all in my veiw
ni***** say blow like a choo but lil ni**** dont know the truth
i hustle and grind im one of a kind
you ni***** dont know nun bout my kind.....

Answer 5

fixed it lol

Answer 6

i see lol

Answer 7

i see

Answer 8

i sent it to you fluffy