Question

Please help me correct this sentence: Both work demonstrates the use of ethos, the moral character, pathos the emotion, and logos the reasoning.

Answer 1

I don't know where the commas go in this sentence and it looks weird.. any suggestions?

Answer 2

"Both work demonstrates the use of ethos, the moral character, pathos, the emotions, and logos, the reasoning"?

Answer 3

I am trying to be short and concise in writing this sentence. I don't want to explain every rhetorical device. Please help me

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DF001
"Both work demonstrates the use of ethos, the moral character, pathos, the emotions, and logos, the reasoning"?
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
I believe that'll work. I don't see how any semicolons would fit in. :)

Answer 5

thank you