Question

Final written song to go on my bands EP. We decided to write a song to honor any soldier devastated by the affects of war. So please give honest and helpful criticism thank you.

Answer 1

Blood of a Brother
by A Burning Masquerade

Verse 1:
(Screaming)
I never knew it'll end like this
The way it always does in movies
I guess this is what I get for testing fate
(Singing)
Will we see the edge of the darkness
Clouding our view from the start
Well at least I know how it is now
before finding out later

Chorus:
I can't even hear you scream
This world is imaginary without you
My brother, stand here by me
This is our spotlight
Not our enemies
Please brother sing to me again
This will be our last night
O' brother where are you

Verse 2:
(Singing)
I've felt the pain you're feeling
You cannot let it take you down
We still have so much left to conquer
(Screaming)
My brother I keep shouting out
God why have you done this to us
It never had to go like this
I'm scared of a tomorrow
(Singing)
Without the blood of a brother beside me

Chorus:
I can't even hear you scream
This world is imaginary without you
My brother, stand here by me
This is our spotlight
Not our enemies
Please brother sing to me again
This will be our last night
O' brother where are you

Hook:
My brother is gone
now what is there left to stand for
We cannot know the absolute
devastation on our souls
Yet God decided that we should
fight like gladiators
rather than stand as one

(ABM faded Singing)
I've heard you scream
we were brothers
Yet a brother wouldn't harm his own will

Chorus:
I can't even hear you scream
This world is imaginary without you
My brother, stand here by me
This is our spotlight
Not our enemies
Please brother sing to me again
This will be our last night
O' brother where are you tonight

*50's like t.v. Monologue with static*
With their last, dying thoughts
We spend these final moments
In honor of those who
Fought for all of us
And those who stood by one another
Till the very end of their lives
Together we honor them
Our brothers in arm
The men and woman who sacrificed everything
To protect us from total annihilation
Tonight we thank you

*broadcast ends and static fades*

Answer 2

@ilovebmth1234, @chosenmatt, @Adrianna.Gongora, Qwertty123, @Lovelarap

Answer 3

@Qwertty123

Answer 4

WOW! That is long!

Answer 5

Yeah probably gonna be like a 5 minute song

Answer 6

you have a band

Answer 7

Yes I do

Answer 8

It's not just mine it's everyone's in the band. In fact I was actually the last one to join.

Answer 9

This is wonderful!

Answer 10

Love it!

Answer 11

oh i really like it!!! great job!

Answer 12

@drawwithpurpose, @SkyVoltage

Answer 13

I misspelled her name.

Answer 14

Are you on YouTube at all?

Answer 15

Not until we have content ready to be released. Once we have enough songs, even if it's a few covers, than we'll make any possible sort of way we can push our music out there. We almost have enough money to pay for our first EP but we won't be able to record until the beginning of June probably. But it should be released by I'm going to say October.

Answer 16

Let me know when you get one! :0

Answer 17

you better let me know !!! =^.^=

Answer 18

great