Question

I need help for some ideas on writing my conclusion paragraph THXS <3

Answer 1

Mr. Jacks shows the rigid pieces of the crumbled mirror to Kate. Just before he stuffs the shattered pieces into his tight pocket of his blue denim pants the rising sun slithers through the holes between the branches of the tree and hits the crumbled pieces and start to make the pieces a disco ball. The reflective light from the mirror starts to hit the dew droplets on the grass and make them light up. Shortly after Mr. Jacks puts the pieces into his pocket, Kate blankly stares at Mr. Jacks' pocket where he just stuffed the disassembled mirror into. "What's wrong Kate?!?" Mr. Jacks asked. "Oh nothing" Kate sighed, "… just that mirror was our only hope that we had of getting the rest of the people out of the plane and getting out of any more force fields." "Oh... Well we can find something else to help us." Mr. Jacks replied. They head back to the edge of the force field when they start hearing shouting and screaming and baby cries in the plane. With fear of what is happening Kate tries to look for a way back into the hangar without the mirror when all of a sudden she hears running footsteps in the runway. She comes to a dead stop in place. Tip-toeing towards the running she comes to the corner of the hangar, she sees the runner. It's Darby. Kate askes her self, "But how and why is she running towards the other hanger?!?" Her curiosity takes over her and she shouts out loud "DARBY?!? Is that you?!?" Darby turns in a flash and than speeds up. But where is she going and why is she going inside the other hangar and HOW ON EARTH DID SHE GET OUT OF THE FORCE FIELD?!?, Kate wondered.



"Mr. Jacks?!?" Kate Shouted. "Right behind you" He replied at the same time "You won't believe what I just saw, I saw Darby already out of the force field the airplane is and was running into another hangar." Kate explained. "Well than what are we waiting for, lets go follow Darby!" Mr. Jacks said in a cheerful voice. They started to jog towards the hangar Darby went into. When of a sudden a mini force field comes shooting straight out from the hanger Darby is in and it hits Kate getting her trapped inside the mini cell. Kate starts to get tear drops running down her cheeks giving her skin a little track of moisture coming to a stop on her bone dry lips. When she looks up she sees Mr. Jacks running away from her, than a waterfall of tears comes gushing down her face flooding then the bottom of the force field like a massive rainstorm just finished. Meanwhile when she was crying just soft enough to hear footsteps coming towards her. When suddenly from around the tree a tiger comes out in a flash and started heading toward Kate in a military crawl. Kate started to work franticly to try to get out of the force field. Whatever she tried didn't work so her only hope was that the tiger couldn't enter the force field. As the tiger crept closer and closer she stood like a pencil in the center of the force field to have an equal amount of distance away from all angles of the mini force field. Then in a blink of an eye the tiger pounced and as Kate turned her head up to watch, the tiger comes crashing through the force field. "Well this is it" Kate thought to her self as she scrambles to one of the corners in the force field.

(Conclusion)

"You won't believe what I just figured out" said the Tiger. "You... you.... you... talked" Kate

Answer 2

@Ms-Brains

Answer 3

okay :D

Answer 4

>.< Okay, I was going to try my hardest to help you...buuutt I am not really good at this. I was thinking of something else when you said you needed help with an essay. Sorry Duck! <333

Answer 5

it's okay thanks though <3

Answer 6

hey I can help if you need but you need to unblock me