Question

cause its all in my head i think about it over and over again and i cant keep picturing you with him
and it hurts so bad, yeah cause its all in my head i think about it i replay it over and over again i cant wait to see you want to see if u have that look in your eyes the one before we said goodbyes but i think she is leaving ohh she is leaving i dont know what else to do now i've realizes that im going down From all the pain you've put me through every time i close my eyes i lock it down ohh i cant go on loving you .

Answer 1

@AnitaS. @AloneS @jigglypuff314 @fluffynose @Mchilds15 tag other people i am working on a song

Answer 2

@Lovelarap

Answer 3

it's nice! ^_^

Answer 4

@Lovelarap thank u

Answer 5

Lol i saw jiggly view this and then leave

Answer 6

@Adrianna.Gongora what do u think tag as many people i need some help with this song

Answer 7

@SburbanMayan_Showtime

Answer 8

thank u

Answer 9

@rebeccaxhawaii

Answer 10

nice :D

Answer 11

@rebeccaxhawaii thank u

Answer 12

@563blackghost thank u

Answer 13

I LOVE IT! :)

Answer 14

Your song is great ^^ and your welcome :D

Answer 15

does any one elsse have any comment about my song im working on still

Answer 16

@Adrianna.Gongora and @563blackghost thank u can you tag people so if i can see what they think

Answer 17

@Teddyiswatshecallsme @ThePancakeBunny @hollz32 @Hayhayz @SamsungFanBoy @MathMusician @Atsie @tanner23456 @kelsey.benton00

Answer 18

This isn't your song.

Answer 19

Then whose song is it?@kelsey.benton00

Answer 20

Nelly ft. Tim Mcgraw - Over & Over Again

Answer 21

she's right ._.

Answer 22

Ahhh. Lolol. This copyin' attention seeking bastard lolol.

Answer 23

^

Answer 24

lmmfao

Answer 25

im making it into a song of mine those are his lyrics but what i have wrote didnt come from nelly song i wrote it because i just got dumped by the girl i loved @kelsey.benton00

Answer 26

Just throwin this out there, you can't take someone else's lyrics and make them into your own song. It's called plagiarizing, hun. I'm sorry you got dumped, and it's great that you're channeling those emotions into music, but you asked people for feedback on "your song," and frankly, this song isn't yours. Nothing you say can change that. So have some respect, and give credit where credit is due.

Answer 27

those lyrics did come from the song over and over but i tryed to change it but it didnt work as i could see when i typed this on here yesterday those words right there is what came in my mind now i may have copy what nelly and tim mcraw said but i didnt mean to i was heart broken and that verse reminds me of what she told me she called me a loser aand broke up with me bc of something stupid that i didnt even do

Answer 28

Change it? The point is it should be your own words. What you wrote was nearly word-for-word what the lyrics are.

Answer 29

Again, a broken heart isn't an excuse for plagiarism. And plagiarism doesn't mend a broken heart. If you need suggestions, ice cream and Glee re-runs work.

Answer 30

any thing to loose her all i want to do is try to figure out how to put that verse in my own words but i couldnt all i do is cry i listen to the song non stop so ill fix it and write a new one and post it on here but as u can see im to heart to even to try to talk about how i feel so if you have any feed back of changing this into my own words i would love to here it all i know is im a dumb kid and a loser so if u want to help me build my covidence back up you will get off of my back about it

Answer 31

Mmm, yeah. Good luck with your new, oRIGINAL song. I wish you the best

Answer 32

Originality will stick out. Plagiarizing will not.

Always bear that in mind.

Answer 33

What @Atsie said.