Question

Who's good at writing sentences in your own words? :)

Answer 1

like if i give you a sentence can you write it similar but differently?

Answer 2

ok

Answer 3

I can, why?

Answer 4

its just for an assignment

Answer 5

Pollutants are being introduced from urban, industrial, and agricultural sources and from the harbor’s tributaries, especially the Peace and Myakka Rivers.

Answer 6

We really shouldn't be doing your assignments for you.

Answer 7

your not its just so i can understand better

Answer 8

I won't write out the sentences myself, but I can help you along that path, so go ahead.

Answer 9

ok what if we help but we can not write it for you. you have to do that on your own that would be cheating if we wrote it for you

Answer 10

That is literally what I just said.

Answer 11

its not cheating its not even part of the assignment ..

Answer 12

its just so i can understand

Answer 13

Sure, just spit some sentences out toward me.

Answer 14

anyways this is the sentence..

Pollutants are being introduced from urban, industrial, and agricultural sources and from the harbor’s tributaries, especially the Peace and Myakka Rivers.

Answer 15

Okay, let's get started. So the main idea of this sentence, is that pollutants are being tossed places they shouldn't, and they specifically name each place.

Answer 16

right...

Answer 17

ME!!!!!! i think

Answer 18

So, do you have anything in mind, or are we just starting from scratch?

Answer 19

I'm better starting from scratch btw

Answer 20

just starting from scratch

Answer 21

@TheGrimReaper666

Answer 22

Alright. So number one tip about rewriting things in your own words. Picturing it in your head, and a thesaurus, those things are your best friends.

Answer 23

So picture the sentence in your head, and describe what is happening.

Answer 24

http://www.protectingourwater.org/watersheds/map/charlotte_harbor/
you're just randomly reading about the charlotte harbor? or is this for an assignment?

Answer 25

@TheGrimReaper666

Answer 26

ok um, now what?

Answer 27

sorry was doing something and @TheGrimReaper666 i know i said the same thing i was already typing then you posted your commit

Answer 28

so the sentence is

Pollutants are being introduced from urban, industrial, and agricultural sources and from the harbor’s tributaries, especially the Peace and Myakka Rivers.

Answer 29

yea

Answer 30

??

Answer 31

ok so like where is the pollutant coming from

Answer 32

um.. idk

Answer 33

Pollutants are being introduced from urban, industrial, and agricultural sources and from the harbor’s tributaries,( especially the Peace and Myakka Rivers.)

Answer 34

ok so they are coming from the Peace and Myakka Rivers

Answer 35

yes

Answer 36

ok so whats the new sentence?

Answer 37

ok so you could say something like this Pollutant are coming form the Peace and Myakka Rivers

but where not done we still need the add the rest of the sentence in there

what could we say about this

Pollutants are being introduced from urban, industrial, and agricultural sources and from the harbor’s tributaries

Answer 38

that the pollutants are being weclome i guess

Answer 39

ok you could say that but why are they being welcomed

Answer 40

but that doesnt sound good.. what would you say? i cant think of a synonym for introduced

Answer 41

no your fine but why are the pollutants being welcomed

Pollutants are being introduced from (urban, industrial, and agricultural sources and from the harbor’s tributaries)

Answer 42

by urban, industrial, and agricultural sources and from the harbor’s tributaries

Answer 43

yes so you could some something like this

Pollutant are coming form the Peace and Myakka Rivers. pollutants are being welcomed because of houses, factorys and farms.

Answer 44

ok awesome! next sentence :)
It is an ecological issue because it discharges nitrogen and algae-laden water into the Charlotte Harbor.

Answer 45

please fan me

Answer 46

ok did it! thanks :) bye

Answer 47

@Atsie @JustDoubleChecking @Qwertty123 @ThisIsANameWithManyLetters

could someone help her out

Answer 48

uh sure

Answer 49

give me a sentence

Answer 50

you know this was 4 day ago she probably doesn't need help any more lol

Answer 51

oh alright, well this is awkward she might need to consider closing this question tho