Question

I need help with a hook?

Answer 1

It's for an argumentative essay that has to be based on facts/ logic. It's about whether or not animal testing should be done as a means for new medical treatment, and I don't think it should be.

Answer 2

whats a hook?

Answer 3

grabs the readers attention, and states why the issue is important.

Answer 4

Have you written anything else yet?

Answer 5

No, I did do an argumentation chart with 3 reasons why I think it should not be done.

Answer 6

But for the essay, this is the first assignment (:

Answer 7

ohhhhhhhhh yea i meber doing thos in my essay

Answer 8

Okay, well first off you are going to need to do some research on the topic. Then we will begin. Then use part one for the hook. http://prntscr.com/aty5v6 it gets the reader of your essay all the necessary information

Answer 9

I'm thinking of doing a evidence-based statement to surprise/hook the reader? & I already know a lot about the topic, I did research beforehand.

Answer 10

According to The Food & Drug Administration 92% of drugs that passed animal testing failed on humans. (would that be a good hook? and then for the rest of introduction I would say what animal testing is and why its important?)

Answer 11

Yes, that's a good one! Although, I'd add a little more detail into that hook. Than it will be perfect.

Answer 12

what would you suggest to add?

Answer 13

I think if you maybe add another fact about how animal testing harms so many it'll be great. That's a good hook

Answer 14

thanks!

Answer 15

No problem! Tag me again if you want me to proof read it