Question

some new writing I did lets see what you think.

Answer 1

3 years ago is a long time but time doesn't change how people feel it just makes it worse or they find a way to deal with it.

You got upset because i had changed. It was 3 years did you think i'd stay the same? You got mad and we fought like we always do, some how you were right and i was wrong just like usual. i loved you and give you my everything, you were my whole world until you left. You come back like nothing happened promise not to leave and within a month we are back at what seems to be our routine.
@redeemed1312 @michaelschmidt @MakaylaTracy @Crissy15 @soprano.h.d0816 @Qwertty123

Answer 2

Nice Job! ^.^ Though some of your i should be capitalized. :D

Answer 3

i's

Answer 4

yeah it was just something I had written and didn't watch for the i's

Answer 5

Hmmmmm.........back to writing with you again XD

~ Broken~
I hate this part right here
I can't stand these tests
Pouring down my face
I thought I could take this today
But I'm broken still
My heart rusting on the window sill
Tender under the crust
A beautiful masterpiece under the rust
I'm trying
I'm done with the lying
I've lied to myself
Broken pieces and dust on my shelves
Cracked with crevices
I really can't believe this
I'm heartbroken
Can't be awoken
Not after the battle
Still shaken up and rattled
Never thought I'd be so vulnerable
Thought this would be bearable
My heart is broken
Heart of gold on the floor like tokens
Just like a pawn
A little fish in a big pond
Rain falling hard
Never knew I'd fall this hard
But I'm broken still

Answer 6

*tears

Answer 7

Perfection and so true....stupid boys

Answer 8

Tysm Dessi, I wrote based off this song
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=S97MaG3kOMY

Answer 9

Nice work ^_^

Answer 10

nice!