Question

~ Diamond~

Answer 1

lol diamond?? thats it?

Answer 2

What is your question redeemed?

Answer 3

So insecure
I don't know what for
Your gorgeous from head to toe
Turning heads every where you go
Your with more than gold
This beauty you have can't be sold
Why you wear all that make up??
You don't need it so stop trying to cover up
Your smile is beautiful
Just like you're body girl
I know you think it's a race
Trying to see who can get more dates
Dont waste your time
Let Prince charming seek and find
Save yourself for Mr. Right
He's out there just wait
I know you think you're times wasted
But wait it out and you'll find
Everything you've ever wanted will come
Just give it time my darling, it'll come
Your beautiful and gorgeous
Please don't say anything differently
You're as beautiful as a crystal
Worth more than gold
More precious than a diamond
Can't you see your a beautiful girl?

Answer 4

@redeemed1312 LOL this is the wrong section xDD

Answer 5

Hello @redeemed1312 :)
You are currently in the OpenStudy Feedback section
I believe you would receive better and faster help if you asked this in the writing section
click the name of the section we are currently in (above) to go to the proper section :)
or click here -> http://openstudy.com/study#/groups/Writing

Answer 6

@ I have open questions in music and writing so.... XD

@ethane honestly, it's best to stop replying. If you can't say things nicely don't say them at all. :)

Answer 7

Thank you @redeemed1312

Answer 8

@SamsungFanBoy

Answer 9

Didn't you get any replies in Writing or Music? @redeemed1312

Answer 10

Okay I'm sorry for bringing you back, would you mind deleting the comments that don't criticize or encourage my writing? Please and thank you so much!!

@Qwertty123 no I didn't....

Answer 11

Sure hold on...

Answer 12

hey that was actually very good i liked it! Keep up the awesome work

Answer 13

@Destinycholie @logan420 @BATMAN*


Thank you!!! :)

Answer 14

@redeemed1312

Answer 15

Really?! And thanks! :) @naate

Answer 16

Ya! it was really good, and it really took my interest, and that says a lot, because it takes a lot for me to get connected to that! And no prob @redeemed1312 :)

Answer 17

Wow, I'm glad you could connect! Tbh that's the first time someone's told me that #daymade

Answer 18

I mean not me personally, cuz ima guy, but I do understand what you were getting at! I luv it!

Answer 19

Well I figured you were a guy but yay!!! I've accomplished something lol btw if you know anyone who would be interested in reading please tag them :) :) :)

Answer 20

This is a very nice poem BTW :)

Answer 21

hey this is friendly i think you mean your "worth" more than gold XD

Answer 22

Yeah, thanks for noticing lol
I did mean to say with lol

Answer 23

oh sorry XD

Answer 24

nice poem though! i luv it!

Answer 25

I meant worth all and nah you're straight lol I'm glad you like it. I'm trying to come up with a poem for girls who are insecure

Answer 26

@pink33
@Peeptom

Answer 27

lol are u calling them insecure? XD

Answer 28

Nah!!! Its supposed to be encouraging!! :\
XDXDXD

Answer 29

im jk

Answer 30

well good poem and i"ll see ya around!

Answer 31

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