Question

I ont know if this is good or not Im not to good at writing a song



(music plays)
ok... it has been so long since that very day
we said goodbye and you slipped away and
I think of you every day but I never seem to heal
oh oh please come back to me im not feeling the same ever since that day ... 2nd year 1 million letters 24 texts but you don't seem to know that ever since the day that you left I-im just not feeling the same// counting the days until you come back to me// 2x
yeah yeah and I have been thinking of you the entire time hoping that I just see you one last time.

Answer 1

This is good so far!

Answer 2

I like it

Answer 3

thx is not is not done yet but this is what I have

Answer 4

it is me foxy

Answer 5

profiol was not werking

Answer 6

This is really good ! I like it a lot