Question

It's a little rough but tell me what you guys think of this short story I've made! :)♥

Answer 1

It’s been months without you here.
Without you here, it’s been months.
I’ve been love struck! By your lightening of course.
I miss you so much, I just need you here.
Prettier, oh, I’ve gotten.
I want you to see my beauty, and I want to see yours.
Fixedly staring and gazing into your eyes, yes, all I want to do.
Funny how time fly’s right?
Because months, yes months without you here, I’ve died ten million times.

Answer 2

Omg, this is lovely!! ^.^ ... Is this for your special someone?

Answer 3

it's good

Answer 4

Thanks guys!!

Answer 5

LOVE IT!!!!

Answer 6

Nice job! ^_^

Answer 7

omg this is beautiful ....made me tear up (bumps in the road recently) . thanks~!

Answer 8

Thank you everyone!!

Answer 9

Impressive :)

Answer 10

Thank you. :)