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OpenStudy (cryleeb):

will fan and medal..

OpenStudy (cryleeb):

need help with a conditional statement/ clincher about animal testing.

OpenStudy (cryleeb):

@IconForHire56

OpenStudy (iconforhire56):

for what exactly?

OpenStudy (iconforhire56):

@cryleeb

OpenStudy (cryleeb):

An argumentative essay on if animal testing should be done as a means for new medical treatment, my claim is that no, animals shouldnt be harmed to benefit humans.

OpenStudy (cryleeb):

It's for my conclusion btw.

OpenStudy (iconforhire56):

so you need a clincher to grip readers for your conclusion?

OpenStudy (cryleeb):

Yeah, I'm using conditional statement as my clincher. So like a "if,then" statement. But I'm not sure what to do for that.

OpenStudy (iconforhire56):

I'd use it as a question: What if it was you being tested on? Start to think about that. Then think about all the small adorable animals being tested on.

OpenStudy (cryleeb):

thats good, but in an argumentative essay you can't base on emotion it's all logic and facts :/ & my teacher recommended a conditional statement ):

OpenStudy (iconforhire56):

let me think a bit more it might take a bit because im cooking dinner too

OpenStudy (iconforhire56):

Maybe take the statistics of how many animals that have died when tested on

OpenStudy (iconforhire56):

(Then,) a maybe a score of how many companies do not use animals to test products

OpenStudy (cryleeb):

Do you want me to give you an example of a conditional statement if that will help? Sorry I havent been on!

Directrix (directrix):

My question regards the thesis statement. Is is true that animal testing is harmful to the animal? Your thesis seems to assume that animal testing is harmful to the animal.

OpenStudy (cryleeb):

Yes, animal testing is extremely harmful to animals. Animals endure terrifying and painful things and arent given painkillers. They are force fed, forced inhalation, food and water deprived, and many more. Also, they are killed at the end of the experiment. @Directrix

umerlodhi (umerlodhi):

if they tested stuff on my mouse ill be pissed

OpenStudy (cryleeb):

hahaha me too, and it's not just mice and rats. They test on millions of dogs, cats, monkeys, and bunnies too. All of that harm and for nothing because 92 out of 100 tests that pass animal testing, fail on humans because animals and humans arent the same biologically.

umerlodhi (umerlodhi):

that is r00d they should stop

OpenStudy (cryleeb):

yeah they really should lmao

umerlodhi (umerlodhi):

i have a thesis statement due on may 13 friday :OOO i should get started on that

OpenStudy (toastforbreakfast):

if youre still needing halp, your statement could be: If animal testing harms innocent creatures n a daily basis, then society needs to take responsibility. ^^^something like that, ig.

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